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1) We celebrate Victory Day on May 9
2) I like to write essays and every year I write an article to newspaper about a vet. The first of all I take interview from him and than I make an article with this inform. I like it very much because this is "live history" and vets often tell us things about that war thst we can't see in any book.
3) For some days before this holiday my family and I take our family photograps and photographs where they are ad we watch them. Every year our grandparents tell us something new about the Great Patriotic War and about how members of our family took part there.
4) Every year in this holiday my family and I go to Enternal Flame to commemorate died in this awful war. Then we go to the Red Square to see the parade.
5) The Victory Day is one of the great celebrated holidays in the world. And I like it very much because in this day we must remind solgers who gave their lives for our today's life. But it doesn't meat that we must think about them only this day.