Дам 30 БАЛЛОВ!!! Проверьте мое сочинение, есть ли ошибки? I like summer holidays,because...

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Дам 30 БАЛЛОВ!!! Проверьте мое сочинение, есть ли ошибки?
I like summer holidays,because can have a rest after school year. I can go to the seaside with my parents. I have more spare time to read books?I can walk my dog. абзац Last summer I spent at the seaside. I lay in the sun, swam in type sea, had a lot of friend. We vent sight-seeing in Odessa. We visiting museums of wax models famous people it was wonderful. I was very exciting after my trip. I got some souvenirs my relatives and friends.

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"And had a lot of friend". Вы тут хотели сказать что заведи много новых друзей? :)

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Да

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Я отметила слова которые ДОБАВИЛА или ПОМЕНЯЛА :)

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Можете списывать :)

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Спасибо огромно!

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Не за что :)

Answer 1

I like summer holidays,because you can have a rest after school year. I can go to the seaside with my parents. I have more free time to read books. I can walk with my dog. Last summer I spent at the seaside. I lay in the sun, swam in sea, and gained many new friends. We went to sight-seeing in Odessa. We visited museum of wax models famous people it was wonderful. I was very exciting after my trip. I got some souvenirs for my relatives and friends.

Answer 2

I like summer holidays, because you can have a rest after the school year. I can go to the seaside with my parents. I have more spare time to read books? I can walk my dog. Last summer I spent at the seaside. I lay in the sun, swam in type sea, had a lot of friends. We went sightseeing in Odessa. We visit museums of wax models famous people it was wonderful. I was very exciting after my trip. I got some souvenirs my relatives and friends.