Проверьте, пожалуйста, сочинение по английскому!!! Dear Michael Thank you for your last...

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Проверьте, пожалуйста, сочинение по английскому!!!

Dear Michael
Thank you for your last letter. It was great to hear from you.
This is a quick note about one event. My school organised a Word Food day, so I and my classmates could taste different meals from around the world.
Students prepared a lot of various dishes. They brought a couple of pizzas and pastas, some sushi and paella, a cheesecake, a pudding and much more. I prepared a delicious beef stew and an apple strudel.
I tasted all that dishes and I really liked sushi. It's yummy! Sushi is low-fat, healthy and authentic. I adore that!
I liked that event very much! I ate very interesting meals which I'd hardly ever taste. I'd go again to this action.
Anyway, what's going on with you? It'd be great to hear some news.
Hope to see you soon.
Bye
Olga


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...my classmates and I... В английском редко местоимение Я выносится вперёд в случае "я и ещё кто-то", правильнее "кто-то и я".

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