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Ancient China is still unknown territory. Recently, in the course of archaeological excavations in Shanxi Province in northern China, were found indirect evidence of the existence of an unknown state, which has not yet been mentioned in any source. On bronze ware, which archaeologists have found, engraved the name Ba Bo, who lived in the kingdom of Ba. The time of manufacture of these products are dated XI-VIII centuries BC. In ancient China, then ruled by the Xizhou, but written records of the time do not mention about the kingdom of Ba. Experts suggest that an unknown state was too small and weak to stay in the chronicles. So, apparently, ordered historians of ancient China, not mentioning the kingdom of Ba word. But information about the ancient state of Ba reached our times through the bronzes. Small ancient state managed to convey his "message" to future generations. With these finds we could "learn something new about the feudal system and technology Xizhou Dynasty, as well as trade and unification of different ethnic groups of the period," according to archaeologist Wang Wei of the Chinese Academy of Sciences. The finds from the ancient China did not cease to amaze the world with its variety and quantity. Were found pottery Shang and Zhou (XIV-XI centuries. BC), during excavations near the town of Shishan, south-west of the country, in March 2008 . These products belong to the time of the mysterious kingdom of Sanxingdui, who disappeared three thousand years ago. We still have thousands skillfully made copper, jade, gold and bronze subjects testifying to surprising variety of the Chinese civilization. Scientists believe that in front of them waiting for new discoveries, new "message of antiquity."

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Ancient China is still unknown territory. Recently, in the course of archaeological excavations in Shanxi Province in northern China, were found indirect evidence of the existence of an unknown state, which hasnt been mentioned in any source yet.  On bronze ware, which archaeologists have found, engraved the name Ba Bo, who lived in the kingdom of Ba. The time of manufacture of these products are dated by XI-VIII centuries BC, then ruled by the Xizhou, but written records of the time do not mention about the kingdom of Ba. Experts suggest that an unknown state was too small and weak to stay in the chronicles. So, ordered historians of ancient China, not mentioned the kingdom of Ba word. But information about the ancient state of Ba reached our times through the bronze. Small ancient state managed to convey his "message" for future generations. With these finds we could "learn something new about the feudal system and technology Xizhou Dynasty, as well as trade and unification of different ethnic groups of the period called" according to archaeologist Wang Wei of the Chinese Academy of Sciences. The finds from the ancient China did not cease to amaze the world with its variety and quantity. Were found pottery Shang and Zhou (XIV-XI centuries. BC), during excavations near the town of Shishan, south-west of the country, in March 2008 . These products belong to the time of the mysterious kingdom of Sanxingdui, who disappeared three thousand years ago. We still have thousands skillfully made copper, jade, gold and bronze subjects testifying to surprising variety of the Chinese civilization. Scientists believe that in front of them waiting for new discoveries, new "message of antiquity."

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Древний Китай остается неизвестной территории. Недавно в ходе археологических раскопок в провинции Шаньси на севере Китая, были обнаружены косвенные доказательства существования неизвестного государства, которые еще не упоминается ни в одном источнике. На бронзовые изделия, которые археологи нашли, выгравировано имя Ба Бо, который жил в царстве Ба.Время изготовления этих изделий от XI-VIII века до нашей эры. В древнем Китае, затем правили Xizhou, но письменные отчеты о времени, не говоря уже о царстве Ба. Эксперты предполагают, что неизвестное государство было слишком маленьким и слабым, чтобы остаться в летописях. Так что, видимо, приказали историков древнего Китая, не говоря уже о царстве Ба слово. Но информация о древнем государстве Ба дошли до наших времен через бронзы. Малый древнего государства удалось передать свое «послание» для будущих поколений. С этих находок мы можем "узнать что-то новое о феодальной системе и технологии Xizhou династии, а также торговли и объединения различных этнических групп того периода," в соответствии с археолог Ван Вэя из Китайской академии наук.Находки из древнего Китая не перестают удивлять мир своим разнообразием и количеством. Были найдены гончарные Шан и Чжоу (XIV-XI вв. Н.э.), во время раскопок в районе города Shishan, на юго-западе страны, в марте 2008 года. Эти продукты относятся ко времени таинственного царства Sanxingdui, который исчез три тысячи лет назад. У нас есть еще тысячи искусно выполненные медь, нефрит, золотые и бронзовые предметы свидетельствующие удивительное разнообразие китайской цивилизации. Ученые считают, что перед ними ждут новые открытия, новые "сообщения о древности».