ИСПРАВТЕ ОШИБКИ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА. I get up at 11 o'clock. I wash my face, and I'm eating...

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ИСПРАВТЕ ОШИБКИ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА.

I get up at 11 o'clock. I wash my face, and I'm eating delicious pancakes for breakfast.
During the day I'm listening to music, talking on the phone with her friends. During the day I watch movies, read books and eat much.
In the evening I cook dinner and go for a walk with my friends. We go to the movies, in the cafe and enjoy the day.
At eight o'clock I go home, have dinner, and watch movies.
And I go to bed at two.

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I get up at 11 o'clock.

I wash my face, and  have some delicious pancakes for breakfast.
During the day I listen to music, talk on the phone with my friends, watch movies, read books and eat much.
In the evening I cook dinner and go for a walk with my friends. We go to the movies, have a fun in the cafe and enjoy each other.
At eight o'clock I go home, have dinner, and watch TV. (а то слишком много movies в тексте)
And I go to bed about two o'clock.