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I was born in а lovely little village. We lived in а nice cottage with а garden. When I was а little boy, I used to play near the old watermill while my mum was teaching kids in the local school. I enjoyed playing in the woods near the village and hunting for frogs at the narrow green river.
I haven’t been back to my village for many years. Now I’ve returned but the place has changed а lot.