Помогите пожалуйста!!! очень надо! вот задание: Think about the position you want to get...

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Помогите пожалуйста!!! очень надо!
вот задание:
Think about the position you want to get in the future. Then imagine
that you have emailed your CV to the company where you’d like to
work, but the personnel manager returned it stating that Profile
section is lacking. Write your Profile (5-7 lines) including the position
you want to get, skills and traits relevant to the position for which
you are applying. (Remember, if you write Profile including your
professional skills you don’t have to include Professional skills
section in your CV.)

Answer 1

I am manager with five years of experience in  the travel and  tourism industries.
I am conscientious and self motivated  individual with great enthusiasm and determination to succeed. I successfully receive, assimilate and evaluate information quickly in order to complete any task efficiently.
Resourceful and proactive, I have effective communication skills.
Hardworking and conscientious, combined with a sense of humour and a friendly approach.  I can work effectively either alone or as part of a team.
I have a special diet and I’m excited that it’s gradually teaching me to be healthier and more disciplined.
I am currently looking for an opportunity to further my career within the travel and tourism industry