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There are different kinds of weather: sunny, rainy, snowy, windy. My favorite weather - warm and sunny, when the breeze sways the branches of trees. In the summer it is often heatwave and after that it is usually downpour and I like it. Also I like photographing bolts of lightning. After the shower there is clean, fresh air and scorching sun ceases to torment people.

I do not like winter and snowy weather, because it's cold. Often there are storms, blizzards, gales which I hate. The sky is overcast and sun rays can get through the clouds very rarely. The nastiest weather –it is sleet. Shoes, clothes become wet and at this time it is very easy to get sick.

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There are different kinds of weather such as sunny, rainy, snowy, windy. My favorite weather is  warm and sunny, when the  breeze sways the branches of trees. In summer it is often heatwave and after that it is usually downpour and I like it. Also I like taking photos of lightning. There is clean and  fresh air after the shower and scorching sun ceases to torment people.

I do not like winter and snowy weather, because it's cold. There are often storms, blizzards, gales which I hate.  When the sky is overcast  the sun rays can get through the clouds very rarely. The nastiest weather is when it sleets. Shoes, clothes become wet and at this time it is very easy to get sick.