ПРОВЕРЬТЕ СОЧИНЕНИЕ Technologies in my life. It's 21st century now and this is a century...

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Technologies in my life.

It's 21st century now and this is a century of high technologies. There're tons of smartphones, notebooks, tablets etc. which help me to communicate with people. I can get instant access to anything I want due to the internet and that's really simplify my life. I spend my free time using my computer it's kind of for fun. Because of the technologies particularly internet I can easily get skills that are necessary in the information age. It's just so easy all you have to do is just to push buttons to get whatever you want. I rely on technologies too much I trust them. I cannot imagine my life without all that stuff. But sometimes if we use all those gadgets too much we can get in deep troubles, unfortunately.

Answer 1

Technologies in my life.

It's the  21st century now and this is a century of high technologies. There're tons of smartphones, notebooks, tablets etc. which help me to communicate with people. I can get instant access to everything I want due to the internet and that really simplifies my life. I spend my free time using my computer. It's  kind of  fun. Because of the technologies especially internet I can easily get skills that are necessary in the information age. The only thing you need is to  push buttons to get whatever you want. I rely on technologies too much.  I trust them. I cannot imagine my life without all these things. But sometimes if we use all those gadgets too much we can get in deep troubles, unfortunately. 

Answer 2

Technologies in my life.

 

It's 21st century now and this is THE PERIOD of high technologies. (нужен опр предлог, а слово заменено, чтобы избежать повтора) LOTS OF GADGETS (smartphones, notebooks, tablets) APPEARED which  help PEOPLE to communicate with EACH OTHER. I can get AN instant access to anything I want WITH THE DEVELOPMENT OF the Internet. THIS MAKES MY LIFE SIMPLER. I spend my free time using computer AND FOR ME IT IS A kind of fun. .