Очень прошу проверить грамматику в кратком рассказе о любимом книжном персонаже. Спасибо. My favourite book characters is the Edmond Dantes. From the book The Count of Monte Cristo. His appearance: He was a heavy-built body, he had blond hair and a round face. Features of character: He has a very strong and persistent character. Special about Edmond Dantes: His desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies.
да ладно!!! там куча ошибок помимо того, что ВЫ указали!
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My favourite book character is Edmond Dantes. He is a main character of the book The Count of Monte Cristo. His appearance:He has a heavy-built body, he has blond hair and a round face. Features of character:He has a very strong and persistent character. Edmond Dantes's features:His desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies
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