ПРОВЕРЬТЕ,ПОЖАЛУЙСТА ОШИБКИ В СОЧИНЕНИИ,ПРОШУ!!!! Hi Alex, Thank you for your letter and...

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ПРОВЕРЬТЕ,ПОЖАЛУЙСТА ОШИБКИ В СОЧИНЕНИИ,ПРОШУ!!!!

Hi Alex,
Thank you for your letter and for your kind thoughts about me. Thanks for the pictures that you sent, they are wonderful. It's a pity you have failed your driving test, but life does not end, I think you will pass this test maybe next month.

Thank you for the invitation to come to you on holidays, and I would like to come to your place to see you.

But, unfortunately, I can't come, because I finally got the work, which I dreamed of. I am working only for a week so I can't take a vacation.
It's so interesting. Every day I meet new people, listen to beautiful music. I'm happy. I hope that you will find work too.

What else? Oh, about reading. I like reading and books play a very important role in my life. Unfortunately I don't have enough time for reading because I'm busy with my studies. That's why I don't spend a lot of time on reading.I began to read stories by john green and I found out that they are very amazing. Try to read "the fault in our stars","paper towns" and I'm sure you'll like it. I am enjoying almost every minute of it.

And finally, I want you come to me for a week next year. I think we'd have a good time.. I hope you will take your test at last and come to me.

I think it is enough for today.
Write soon.
My best wishes to you and your family


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Thanks for the pictures you have sent me.*
I began to read stories writting by Gohn Green. 
Write me back soon. 
Best wishes, [Ваше имя]. - эта конструкция используется вместо "Write soon. My best wishes to you and your family"
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