Проверьте пожалуйста.исправьте ошибки,если есть:) I have read the article "why TV is bad...

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I have read the article "why TV is bad for us" and I want to express my opinion on it.
TV really does people lazy. When the person watches TV, he becomes very passive. People spend in front of the TV sometimes the most part of the time. We are lazy to go outside and just to breathe fresh air. When we watch TV, we don't use the brain at all. Very often on TV don't stage the intellectual show and it is the fact. The fact also is that on TV manifestation of violence is brightly expressed. But fight against it. Censorship and restriction of age is established.
In my opinion, TV badly influences people. Instead of the active recreation useful to health, people choose passive and useless rest.

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I have read the article "why TV is bad for us" and I want to express my opinion on it. 
TV really makes people lazy. When a person watches TV, he becomes very passive. Sometimes people spend in front of TV most of their time. We are lazy to go outside and just breathe fresh air. When we watch TV, we don't use our brain at all. The fact is that TV doesn't very often stage intellectual shows. Also violence is brightly expressed on TV. But the law tries to fight against it. Censorship and restriction of age is established. 

In my opinion, TV influences people badly. Instead of the active recreation, which is good for health, people choose passive and useless rest.