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Пожалуйста, помогите с текстом.
Нужно проверить, исправить ошибки, может заменить что-то.
Срочно нужно.
Why I would like to live in the city and not in the country?
I'd like to tell you that I prefer life in the city and not in the country, because for me there are more advantages. For example, the city has shopping, transportation, good hospitals, Internet. There's also an opportunity to get an education at the University.
But I think that nowadays many people prefer life in the country because of the fresh air and beautiful nature. There are people who are tired of noisy cities, overcrowded streets and roads. Such people want to live in a quiet place, where they find a harmony with nature.
Where better to live: in the city and or in the country? It seems to me that we choose house based on interests and plans. So, I'm sure that no matter where you live, the most important thing - to feel happy and to realize your potential.

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Why I would like to live in the city and not in the country.
I'd like to tell you that I prefer life in the city and not in the country, because there are more advantages for me there. For example, there are a lot of shops, different means of transport and good hospitals in the city. In the city you can get easy access to the Internet. It is also possible to get good education at the University.
But I think that nowadays many people prefer life in the country because of (the) fresh air and beautiful nature there. There are people who are sick and tired of noisy cities, overcrowded streets and roads. Such people want to live in a quiet place, where they can find harmony with nature.
Where is it better to live in a city or in the country? It seems to me that the choice depends on our interests and plans. So, I'm sure that it doesn't matter where you live, the most important thing is to feel happy and to realize your potential.