30 БАЛЛОВ. Помогите найти ошибки, у меня совсем плохо с грамматикой Firstly, I can't live...

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30 БАЛЛОВ. Помогите найти ошибки, у меня совсем плохо с грамматикой

Firstly, I can't live without my mobile phone with which I listen to my favorite music and take pictures of interesting moments of my life.
Secondly, I can't imagine life without my computer, which I use to find a variety of information on the Internet and send text messages to my friends.
And finally the third necessary thing is my TV on which I watch the news.

Answer 1

Я немного переделала, так с точки зрения письма правильнее) удачи Firstly, I can't live without my mobile phone with which I listen to my favorite music and take pictures of interesting moments in my life. Secondly, I can't imagine life without my computer.I use it to find a variety of information on the Internet and send text messages to my friends. Finally, the most necessary thing is my TV. I watch the news on it.

Answer 2

Всё хорошо! Будьте уверенней в себе!