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My friends and I were driving to another town for a music concert. We were 16 years old. Weather was very warm and sunny at first, but then it started to rain. We have long wanted to visit the concert and so did not stop. We did not want to miss the concert of our favorite band. We ate candy, listened to the radio and laughed. We arrived in the evening, the rain became stronger, we got wet, everywhere was dirty. We went for something to eat and I remarked that I would always bring a umbrella to concerts in future. We sat in the cafe for 2 hours and went home.