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Прошу проверить текст на наличие ошибок. И некоторые слова, которые не очень подходят или не похожи на начальный уровень, просьба заменить на более простые и примитивные.

This summer I went to Lake Balkhash. Weather was very hot and solar. Water was warm. I went with the friends. We bathed and played beach volleyball. Fried meat in the evening and ate a water-melon. We were there three days.
But for the third day weather strongly deteriorated. There was a cold wind and the rain dripped. To bathe it was cold and we walked on the coast. At night in the lake the moon was reflected. It was very beautiful.

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This summer I went to Lake Balkhash. The weather was very hot and sunny. The water was warm. I went with my friends(а куда??). We bathed and played beach volleyball. In the evening we ate fried meat  and  a water-melon . We were three days there.But for the third day weather strongly deteriorated. There was a cold wind and rain. We couldn't swim, because it was cold and we walked on the coast. At night  the moon was reflected in the lake. It was very beautiful.