Кто хорошо понимает английский,помогите проверить нету ли тут ошибок,и все ли артикли...

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Кто хорошо понимает английский,помогите проверить нету ли тут ошибок,и все ли артикли стоят правильно и вообще всё ли тут правильно,если нет,помогите исправить.
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My name is Veronica and I am 16 years old.I’m often asked these days what I want to become in the future.It’s not an easy question to answer, because there are so many interesting professions. My parents say I have to choose what is best for me.I decided to become an economist.In my opinion, it’s one of the most demanded and prestigious professions nowadays. It involves lots of self-education, research and analyzing, which can be interesting for me. Studying economics I can learn a lot about current state of our country in the world market. Economists exercise many useful functions. For example, they can calculate costs and probable profits, provide business forecasts, monitor taxation levels, determine enterprise structures, investigate international economic situation, etc. All these activities seem to be rather exciting.
I hope that I’ll be a good economist. Like many other people I would like to spend a year abroad working as an economist. It would give me an opportunity to borrow the experience and to see the world.

Answer 1

My parents say I have to choose what is best for me. (I should choose – это же совет родителей, не необходимость)  I decided to become an economist. (I have decided OR Some time back I decided)

In my opinion, it’s one of the most demanded and prestigious professions nowadays (the most in-demand professions)

It involves lots of self-education, research and analyzing, which can be interesting for me. (analyzing что? например analyzing stock markets – to analyze переходный глагол)

 

Studying economics I can learn a lot about current state of our country in the world market. (the current state of…)

It would give me an opportunity to borrow the experience and to see the world. (наверное to gain/to get (some) experience OR to broaden my experience)

Answer 2

My name is Veronica and I am 16 years old.I asked these days myself, what I want to become in the future? It’s not an easy question to answer, because there are so many interesting professions. My parents said I should choose what is the best for me. I'd to become an economist. In my opinion, it’s one of the most demanded and prestigious professions nowadays. It involves lots of self-education, research and analyzing, and it can be interesting for me. Studying economics I can learn a lot about current state of our country in the world market. Economists exercise have many useful functions. For example: they can calculate costs and possible profits, provide business forecasts, monitor taxation levels, determine enterprise structures, investigate international economic situation, etc. All these activities seem to be really exciting.
I hope that I’ll be a good economist. Like many other people I would like to spend a year abroad working as economist. It would give me an opportunity to borrow the experience and see the world.

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Здесь точно всё правильно?

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