Помогите, срочно. Нужно проверить, правильно ли составлены конструкции в предложениях и...

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Помогите, срочно. Нужно проверить, правильно ли составлены конструкции в предложениях и сходится ли всё по смыслу. Вот текст: Hello. Today, I`m going to talk to you about an important holiday in my country, Russia. In late spring, we celebrate Maslenitsa (Pancake Day), the holiday of pancakes. Maslenitsa lasts seven days. On that holiday we eat pancakes with sour cream, sing and dance in a ring, burn an effigy. Every day of Maslenitsa people once called. First day – appointment. On this day people make pancakes. Second day – games. On this day people sledding and eat the pancakes. On third day son-in-law comes to mother-in-law for pancakes. Every day has a name. At the end of the holiday we accompany the winter. Maslenitsa brings a lot of fun to children and adults. After the Maslenitsa take place the Lent.

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Today, I`m going to tell you about an important holiday in my country, Russia. In late spring, we celebrate Maslenitsa (the Pancake Day), a holiday of pancakes. Maslenitsa lasts for seven days. During this holiday we eat pancakes with sour cream, we sing and dance in circles and burn effigies. Every day of Maslenitsa has its own name. The first day is called "the appointment". On this day people make pancakes. The second day is "games". On this day people go sledding and eat pancakes. On the third day sons-in-law visit their mothers-in-law to be treated with pancakes. At the end of the holiday we say goodbye to the winter. Maslenitsa is a lot of fun for both children and adults. After Maslenitsa comes Lent.