Проверьте пожалуйста текст о себе.Очень срочно нужно..My name is Nastya. I'm 13. I was...

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Проверьте пожалуйста текст о себе.Очень срочно нужно..

My name is Nastya. I'm 13. I was born in Moscow. My family is big. I have mother, father,sister,grandmother and a cat.My mother's name is Marina and she's an accountant. My father's name is Valera and he is a polygraphic worker. My sister's name is Zoya and she is a doctor. My grandmother's name is Zoya, too and she isn't work. My cat's name is Shl'opa and it's very active and funny.So,I'm a pupil of 8 form. My favorite subjects are math, English and Biology.I'm very sociable and friendly person and I have got a lot of friends among my schoolmates.I have many hobbies because there are many interesting things to do.I like cooking and my specialty is French beef. Also I enjoy dancing. For example hip- hop,tecktonik dance, break-dance. In my spare time I go in fitness centre or on chess classes. Well, I really want to study in this school, because I have a lot of friends here and I know that this school is very strong and good. I know that my English isn't very good, but I will try to do it better.That's all.

Answer 1

My name is Nastya. I'm 13. I was born in Moscow. My family is big. I have a mother, a father, a sister, a grandmother and a cat.My mother's name is Marina and she's an accountant. My father's name is Valera and he is a polygraphic worker. My sister's name is Zoya and she is a doctor. My grandmother's name is Zoya, too and she doesn't work. My cat's name is Shl'opa and it's very active and funny.So,I'm a pupil of the 8th form. My favorite subjects are Maths, English and Biology.I'm very sociable and friendly person and I have got a lot of friends among my schoolmates.I have many hobbies because there are many interesting things to do.I like cooking and my speciality is French beef. Also I enjoy dancing. For example hip- hop,tecktonik dance, break-dance. In my spare time I go to the fitness centre or to the chess club. Well, I really want to study at this school, because I have a lot of friends here and I know that this school is very good. I know that my English isn't very good, but I will try to do it better.That's all.

Answer 2

My name is Nastya. I'm 13. I was born in Moscow. My family is big. I have a mother, a father, a sister, a grandmother and a cat.My mother's name is Marina and she's an accountant. My father's name is Valera and he is a polygraphic worker. My sister's name is Zoya and she is a doctor. My grandmother's name is Zoya, too and she doesn't work. My cat's name is Shl'opa and it's very active and funny.So, I'm a pupil of the 8th form. My favourite subjects are math, English and Biology. I'm a very sociable and friendly person and I have got a lot of friends among my schoolmates.I have many hobbies because there are many interesting things to do. I like cooking and my specialty is French beef. Also I enjoy dancing. For example hip- hop,tecktonik dance, break-dance. In my spare time I go to the fitness centre or attend chess classes. Well, I really want to study in this school, because I have a lot of friends here and I know that this school is very good. I know that my English isn't very good, but I will try to do it better.That's all.