The dream of every person to see the world. I dream to visit the most romantic city in...

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The dream of every person to see the world.
I dream to visit the most romantic city in the world - in Paris. For me, Paris - a fairy tale. Paris - the city of my dreams. My dream is to visit Disneyland. I saw beautiful pictures in the book of the largest theme park - Disneyland. I think I will be the happiest in the world, if I see Paris. I would like to see the Eiffel Tower. I hope she is fine. In Paris, a lot of interesting places that you can visit the Louvre Museum, Notre Dame de Paris, the Champs-Elysees and many other places. I would go through all the streets of this city.

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The dream of every person is to see the world.

I dream is to visit the most romantic city in the world - in Paris. For me, Paris is a fairy tale. Paris is the city of my dreams. My dream is to visit Disneyland. I saw beautiful pictures in the book of the largest theme park - Disneyland. I think I will be the happiest person in the world, if I see Paris. I would like to see the Eiffel Tower. I hope it is fine. In Paris, there are a lot of interesting places that you can visit such as the Louvre Museum, Notre Dame de Paris, the Champs-Elysees and many other places. I would like to go through all the streets of this city.


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Answer 2

1) надо простоI my dream visit Disneyland 2) I think I will be the happinest 3) In Paris, a lot of interesting places that you can visit без the Louvre Museum 4)Notre Dame the Paris. И всё