Проверьте текст ** наличие ошибок : I was born on 27th September. Birthday is a very...

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Проверьте текст на наличие ошибок : I was born on 27th September. Birthday is a very happy day for me. My birthday be celebrated at home with family. After that we go to the cinema. I usually don't decorate my home. Clean home best decoration. I never invited friends to my birthday party. The best company is my family. But usually I celebrate my birthday alone. To invite someone on my birthday, I called them on the phone or write sms. On my birthday i am cooking : salads, pizza, jelly, pie, vegetables ets. Entertainment it is a walk to the cinema. On a very interesting film. Usually 3D. Happy day is a small gift for everybody.

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I was born September 27. Birthday is a very happy day for me. My birthday is celebrated at home with family. After it we usually go to the cinema. I usually do not decorate my house. Clean house does not need to decorate (Чистый дом не нужно украшать). I never invite friends birthday. (Стоит использовать одно время при слитном рассказе) The best company for me is my family. But usually ( Я бы иcиспользовал слово sometimes (иногда)) I celebrate my birthday alone. If I want someone to invite to my birthday I call him or write sms. For my birthday, I usually cook salads, pizza, jelly, pie, vegetables etc (et cetera). Going to the cinema is the main part of the entertainment for my birthday. I usually go to the cinema to watch new films in 3d. My gift to all guests is this wonderful holiday.