Правельно ли составлен текст?One evening we went with my mother to the bookstore. The...

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One evening we went with my mother to the bookstore. The shop was very dark and cool. Suddenly we heard footsteps, I went to the sound. But in the room where there were steps it was not the people. I was scared me and my mom decided to leave. All night I could not sleep because I was shock-. On the morning I decided to go back to the shop, but the sign on the door "closed." I asked in a nearby shoe, how long have closed the book, and she said, "For two months, as it is closed." I was scared and I decided to forget this day as a dream.

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One evening my mother and I went to the bookstore.
It was very dark and cool in the shop.
 Suddenly we heard footsteps, I went forward the sound.
But there was nobody in that room.
I was afraidand my mom decided to leavethe shop.
At night I could not sleep because I was shocked.
In the morning I decided to come back to the shop, but the sign on the door was "closed."
I asked the shop-assistant from the nearest shoe-shop how long the bookshop had been closed, and she answered, that about two months.
 I  scared and decided to forget that day as a bad dream.