HELP ME PLEASE! ПОМОГИТЕ НАЙТИ ОШИБКИ В МОЁМ ПЕРЕВОДЕ И ИСПРАВИТЬ ИХ! ЗАРАНЕЕ СПАСИБО! I...

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HELP ME PLEASE! ПОМОГИТЕ НАЙТИ ОШИБКИ В МОЁМ ПЕРЕВОДЕ И ИСПРАВИТЬ ИХ! ЗАРАНЕЕ СПАСИБО!
I know a gardener's work, which is courting plants. I want to become a translator, because they get a good salary. People make happy at work a good salary and excellent working team. Yes, I want to get a good job and get a lot of money. I sympathize with longer job search work translator. I'm ten years leading translator who will have good qualifications and work experience. Serious work is to give yourself a lot of work and get a good salary. It does not matter when you want to combine work and study. It's not everyone succeeds, as it is necessary to pay due attention to both of them. The ideal work there, as everywhere has its disadvantages. Most importantly, the family, as the work is not always eternal. No problem, if not a happy family with the good work, because it is difficult to combine. Ultimately, your partner will change you and leave you. Favorite work is hard to find, which is fun, because not everyone can afford it. Do not worry if this does not happen.

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I know that gardener's work is courting (taking care of) plants. I want to become an interpretor (это более часто используется и лучше звучит), because they get a good salary. People make happy at work a good salary and excellent working team. (странная и нопонятная формулировка предложения, непонятно, что ты хочешь сказать) Yes, I want to get a good job and get a lot of money. I sympathize with longer job search work translator. (также непонятное предложение) I'm ten years leading translator (если ты хочеь написать, что ты уже 10 лето лучший переводчик, то i have been the best interpretor) who will have good qualifications and work experience. (далее несогласованность времен, лучше написать I want to have ...) Serious work (может быть job?) is to give yourself a lot of work and get a good salary. (серьезная работа- это давать себе много работы и получать хор. зарплату? хм.. что-то тут не так по-русски) It does not matter when you want to combine work and study.(if you want to...study -глагол, лучше напиши university/ school/...) It's not everyone succeeds(not everyone can succeed), as it is necessary to pay due attention to both of them. (but it is..)The ideal work there, (непонятно, что имеется ввиду)as everywhere has its disadvantages. (every job has)
Очень сложно искать ошибки в переводе, не зная, что имеется ввиду в предложении. Смысл многих предложений на раскрыт, лучше напиши текст на русском и на англ, тогда можно будет увидеть все ошибки