HELP ME PLEASE! ПОМОГИТЕ НАЙТИ ОШИБКИ В МОЁМ ПЕРЕВОДЕ И ИСПРАВИТЬ ИХ! ЗАРАНЕЕ СПАСИБО!...

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HELP ME PLEASE! ПОМОГИТЕ НАЙТИ ОШИБКИ В МОЁМ ПЕРЕВОДЕ И ИСПРАВИТЬ ИХ! ЗАРАНЕЕ СПАСИБО!
People may have problems with the work, in the family. To solve them, you need to find a compromise. I'm addicted on my phone and I fight with it every day. It annoys me. I directly asked about his problems and try to solve them. How terrible for everyone, if he is embarrassed of their problems. In all situations, the best advice I give my mother who has your life experience. It is wonderful. I dealt with my friend who was cutting his wrists because of the guy. It was a shame. What a pity that she did not listen to my advice and made their own way. People are inherently selfish and do not listen. Before them comes only when the peak comes the problem. It is shocking to me.


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перевести надо?

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исправить в данном тексте ошибки. могу кинуть данный текст на русском

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People may have problems with the freetime in the family. To solve them, you should find a compromise. I'm addicted to my phone and I'm fighting to do something on it every day. It annoys me. I have directly asked my family about their problems and have tried to solve them. And I wasn't expecting so terrible problems. All members of my family are embarrassed because of their problems. In all situations, the best advice that I got was from my mother who had experienced my life. It is wonderful. Also, I dealt with one of my friends. He was cutting his veins because of the guy. What a shame! And what a pity that he haven't listened to my advice and have chosen his own way. People are very selfish and they don't listen to me. Before it came to the edge they didn't want to talk to me about their problems. It's quite shocking to me.

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Переводчик? Просто тут исправить ооочень сложно. Непонятно какая тема, слова не связаны, времена не согласованы и т. д. больше ничем помочь не смогу.

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да, могу скинуть на русском.

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спасибо большое:3