Надо продолжить рассказ (150-200 сл.) One night Mrs Jones was driving her car from London...

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Надо продолжить рассказ (150-200 сл.)
One night Mrs Jones was driving her car from London to Cambridge with a friend of family, Mrs Ted Pratt.
Suddenly they saw an orange light in the sky. The car started to shake...

Answer 1

And Mrs. Jones hit brakes to stop the car and find out what was that high in the sky. Both ladies were scared but managed to get off the car and stood close to each other trying to make a guess about that orange bright light falling down from the sky. They have never seen something like that before. In a few seconds, the light covered nearly two kilometers, then it started to descend and shaped into a small but bright sphere.  They breathed freely...The light was generated with the searchlight attached to the wing of the plane flying toward the airport. Both women remembered that they drove too close to the airport, so it was not surprising that planes flew too close to the ground here.
      Ladies burst out laughing, got into the car, and went off.

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Спасибо большое! :)

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Answer 2

...and they were very scared, they couldn't think what happened to them. First they thought it was earthquake, but they were wrong.
It was something unusual and supernatural thing. They went out of car and followed bright light. They saw huge object, it was situated about 100 metres away.
They were very curious and decided come closer. They saw a few small windows, four tinies doors and orange lights inside and they realized that must be a UFO. They felt confused, because they didn't believe it. Mrs Jones and Mrs Ted Pratt wanted to touch it, but when they tried to do it, this thing suddenly flew away to the sky. They were shocked by what happened with them that night

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Спасибо большое! :)