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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of the school №75 in Lviv. This letter is regarding the competition. I am writing to tell you why impressed me the story Katheryn Winnick and why I want take part in this competition.
I would like to take part in the competition of Canadian-Ukrainian organization O.W.L. because in my mind it will give me nice knowledge of English. I will be interested to meet with Ukrainian beyond the our country. Learn about their life in Canada. Find new friends who live overseas. I will be interested to see Canadian cities and cultural heritage of this country.
I selected Katheryn Winnick because she does not eschews of origin and at every opportunity emphasizes that she is Ukrainian. I watched a movie with her participation and I like her acting skills. It interested me as an individual and I decided to explore her life.
I look forward to answer.
Your faithfully,

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regarding TO the
why I am impressed with Katheryn Winnick's story 
I want TO take part 
TO my mind,it will give me some knowledge of English. 
I WOULD LIKE to meet UkrainianS beyond our country,to learn about their life in Canada, TO find new friends who live overseas( abroad)
 I WOULD LIKE to see 
I selected -I CHOSE
she isn`t ashamed of her national background and she emphasizes that she is Ukrainian at the first (the earliest)opportunity
She is interesting as an individual and I decided to turn onto her life.
I am looking forward to your answer.