Проверьте пожалуйста грамотность написания текста, исправьте ошибки если есть Allow me...

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Проверьте пожалуйста грамотность написания текста, исправьте ошибки если есть
Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Tanya Mavrina. I'm 22 years old. I was born in Chelyabinsk. Also live in Chelyabinsk.
I have a family husband and daughter. Husband's name is Sergei, he works as a mechanic - repairman. Daughter's name is Lisa she is 2 years. Will soon go to kindergarten.
In the summer we go to the village to the relatives of the husband. Relax from the city bustle.
I'm not working, doing baby and chores around the house.

Answer 1

Я перепишу его немного))

Let me introduce myself. My name is Tanya Mavrina. I'm 22 years old. I was born in Chelyabinsk and still live here.
My family consists of my husband and a daughter. My husband's name is Sergei. He works as a mechanic. My daughter's name is Liza and she is 2 years old. She will go to a kindergarten soon.
In summer we'll go to my husband's relatives who live in the village. We are going to relax from city's bustle.
I do not work at the moment. I just take care of my baby and do house chores.

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Спасибо

Answer 2

Тут нету ошибок,все грамотно. (но это не точно)