Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение ** ГИА. Dear Tom, Great to hear from you again and I am...

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Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение на ГИА.
Dear Tom,
Great to hear from you again and I am sorry for not writing for ages. I have been really busy with my exams.
Let me help you. Young people in my country doesn't read as much as old people.
As for second question, I believe that traditional books are better than e-books. Because e-books have disadvantages. And one of them is that the e-book can get discharged. Besides, if you lose your e-book, you will lose all the books that were on it, which you wanted to read.
It is great that you have joined a tennis club. Do you like playing tennis? When do your tennis lessons begin? Where will your training take place?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Mira

Answer 1

1) "And one of them is that the e-book can get discharged" - правильно "And one of them is that the e-book can discharge".
2) "Besides, if you lose your e-book, you will lose all the books that were on it, which you wanted to read" - Я бы сказала "Besides, if you lose your e-book, you will lose all the books that were on it, which you WANT to read".
Всё остальное правильно, молодец!
Удачи на экзамене!