Пожалуйста, проверьте ошибки построения предложений, сомневаюсь, что все правильно. Hi, I...

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Пожалуйста, проверьте ошибки построения предложений, сомневаюсь, что все правильно.
Hi, I live in ... . I very much like in my village the big woods, clean air, it is a lot of various plants.
The free time I
I take usually in a circle
friends and family. Summer
weather at us happens different, there can be rains,
bright can shine
the sun, often happens a thunderstorm. I very much want to see you at myself on a visit, I will acquaint you with my friends and we will cheerfully spend time. I look forward summer, dear friend!

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Hi, I live in ... . In my village, I like big woods, clean air and that there is a lot of various plants the most. Usually, I spend my free-time with my friends and family. Here, in my village, the summer weather can be different - there can be rains, can be a bright shining sun, but the thunderstorm happens more often. I would really like to see you in my village, so I can acquaint you to my friends and spend time happily. I look forward summer, dear friend!