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СРОЧНООО! 50 БАЛЛОВ! Помогите пожалуйста найти ошибки. Текст должен быть в PRESENT SIMPLY. I'd like to describe you my working day. I hate getting up early, but I got used to it. On weekdays I usually get up at 6. I make my bed, wash my face, put my clothes on and go the kitchen to have breakfast. I do not like big breakfast, I prefer a cup of tea and a sandwich.
I leave the house at 7.20 .Then I go to college on foot. It takes me 30 minutes to get to college. Lessons begin at 8:00 a. m. and finish at about 3 p. m. I seldom have lunch in the college canteen. I usually take a packed lunch with me.
At 3 o'clock I come home and eat light porridges. After my dinner, I have a rest for a couple of hours and then I do my homework. If I have some spare time I do some work about the house. I sweep the floor, dust the furniture and clean the carpets with the vacuum-cleaner.
I usually have supper at 6 o'clock p. m. Then I go on with my work. As a rule, I finish doing my homework at about 8 o'clock. At 10 I go to bed.

Answer 1

I'd like to describe you my working day. I hate getting up early, but I must do it. On weekdays I usually get up at 6 o'clock. I make my bed, wash my face, dress my clothes and go to the kitchen to have a breakfast. I do not like big breakfast, I prefer a cup of tea and a sandwich. 
I leave my house at 7.20 .Then I go to college by my foot. It takes about 30 minutes to get to college. Lessons begin at 8:00 a. m. and finish about 3 p. m. I seldom have lunch in the college canteen. I usually take a packed lunch with me. 
At 3 o'clock I come home and eat light porridges. After my dinner, I have a rest for a couple of hours and then I do my homework. If I have some spare time I do some house work. I sweep the floor, dust the furniture and clean the carpets with the vacuum-cleaner. 
I usually have supper at 6 o'clock p. m. Then I go on with my work. As a rule, I finish doing my homework at about 8 o'clock. At 10 o'clock I go to bed

Answer 2

в PRESENT SIMPLE. I'd like to describe for you my working day. I hate getting up early, but I get used to it. On weekdays I usually get up at 6. I make my bed, wash my face, put my clothes on and go the kitchen to have breakfast. I do not like big breakfasts, I prefer a cup of tea and a sandwich. 
I leave the house at 7.20. Then I go to college on foot. It takes me 30 minutes to get to the college. Lessons begin at 8:00 am and they finish at about 3 pm. I seldom have lunch in the college canteen. I usually bring a packed lunch. 
At 3 o'clock I come home and eat light porridges. After my dinner, I have a rest for a couple of hours and then I do my homework. If I have some spare time I do some work about the house. I sweep the floor, dust the furniture and clean the carpets with the vacuum-cleaner. 
I usually have supper at 6 pm. Then I go on with my work. As a rule, I finish doing my homework at about 8 o'clock. At 10 I go to bed.