Очень сильно прошу! Помогите исправить ошибки в моем сочинение! Английский это мой минус...

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Очень сильно прошу! Помогите исправить ошибки в моем сочинение! Английский это мой минус :/

There are 4 years, we had the worst holiday. My honey and me had been on internet to look at offers and rent a villa for summer holiday and we had seen a beautiful and cheap offers very beautiful villa, really big swimming pool, really clean and lot of things to visit near of the villa. So we had reserved on internet and we had to pay the amount of the villa by VISA. The day of the starting is finally arrived we had taken our suitcase and we going at airport for taking us fly. Already, that begin really bad cause us fly was canceled so we had taked a another fly direction Spain. After 2 hours of fly, we had arrived, the sun shining, it was really hot. We was really happy to spend holiday in Spain. It was new for us. The taxi came to lead us to our villa. Arrived at destination we had discovered its was a land under construction, we were scammed 3000 euros for a villa that does not even existравить


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 Вот. Исправленное   There are 4 years, we had the worst holiday. My honey and me had been on internet to look at offers and rent a villa for summer holiday and we had seen a beautiful and cheap offers very beautiful villa, really big swimming pool, really clean and lot of things to visit near of the villa. So we had reserved on internet and we had to pay the amount of the villa by VISA. The day of the starting is finally arrived we had taken our suitcase and we go at airport for taking us fly. Already, that begin really bad cause us fly was canceled so we had taken another fly direction Spain. After 2 hours of fly, we had arrived, the sun shining, it was really hot. We are really happy to spend holiday in Spain. It was new for us. The taxi came to lead us to our villa. Arrived at destination we had discovered its was a land under construction, we were scammed 3000 euros for a villa that does not even exist
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