Помогитеее!!! ПРОВЕРЬТЕ ТЕКСТ ** АНГЛИЙСКОМ. БУДУ БЛАГОДАРНА.On behalf of all the...

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Помогитеее!!! ПРОВЕРЬТЕ ТЕКСТ НА АНГЛИЙСКОМ. БУДУ БЛАГОДАРНА.On behalf of all the children of the Earth, I want to refer to the Presidents of all countries, to soldiers, and to their mothers, to the whole world community- with an appeal for peace throughout the world. We want to live in a world without borders of states, so that all children in the world have a happy, peaceful childhood. We appeal to your heart: stop this war. We believe that any conflict can be resolved peacefully. The Earth is our common home and the World is tired of wars! It is so important that there are peace all over the world. Firstly peace should be in everyone’s soul and family.In peacetime, people feel calm. They are busy with their cares, deeds, they have no fear. But people are striving for power without noticing the consequences. Throughout history there have been wars; Two World Wars in 20th century no region of the world has avoid. War does not bring happiness. It only brings evil and fear. Look around! Is not this world beautiful? We deserve it for free and we must protect our mother nature. Where the cannons thunder, there birds fall silent; the plant and animal worlds are dying; once clear waters become muddy and dead. Losing their unique underwater world; the high mountains shudder, erupting with sizzling avalanches; many civilians are dying, who absolutely not striving for violence; the bitterness of losses flows through the sorrowful tears of children, washing away from the little faces the remains of a happy childhood. If everyone were thinking not only about themselves but about others everyone would be much happier. If we surrounded others with love, then we would be satisfied with this life and would not think of suicide. We can not allow that the fate of people depended on dirty money. We believe in the bright future. We believe that it's not over yet. We have the opportunity to change everything. We believe that our future will be better and the wars between countries will stop, and the peace between nations will come to the world. People! Think what are your victories over a planet destroyed by the wars? People! Turn on the mind and common sense! Look into the eyes of a defenseless child and think is it worth it? Everything can be returned: both money and respect. Only lost time can not be returned. A passive reaction to everything that happens in life rarely brings positive results. So let's take care of each other.


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