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I want to say a few words about the place that I recently visited . Park Kuskovo, located in the East of Moscow. This is an incredibly beautiful place where you can breathe fresh air , to walk and to do sports. It is ideal for walks with friends . Quiet , green , smooth paths and a pond with ducks. There is the famous Palace pond in front of the manor Sheremetev and no less famous island in the middle of the pond.For me Kuskovo is the best place for a picnic with friends and family, long walks with the dog and a quiet holiday. To be honest, there is sometimes scary , especially early in the morning or when the sun goes down . But still , it's an amazing place where you do not want to leave .

Answer 1

I want to say a few words about the place that I recently visited . Park Kuskovo, located in the East of Moscow. This is an incredibly beautiful place where you can breathe fresh air,  walk and  do sports. It is ideal for walks with friends . There are quiet, green, smooth paths and a great pond with ducks. There is the famous Palace pond in front of the manor Sheremetev and no less famous island in the middle of the pond, which is involved in the  history  of  this estate.For me Kuskovo is the best place for a picnic with friends and family, long walks with the dog and a quiet holiday. To be honest, there is sometimes scary in this place under huge  old trees, especially early in the morning or when the sun goes down . But still it's an amazing place what you do not want to leave.

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Answer 2

I want to say a few words about the place that I have recently visited - Park Kuskovo, located in the East of Moscow. This is an incredibly beautiful place where you can breathe fresh air, walk and do sports. It is ideal for walks with friends: quiet, green, smooth paths and a pond with ducks. There is the famous Palace Pond in front of the Sheremetevs' manor and no less famous island in the middle of the pond. For me Kuskovo is the best place for a picnic with friends and family, long walks with the dog and for a quiet holiday. To be honest, there is sometimes scary, especially early in the morning or when the sun goes down. But still, it's an amazing place which you do not want to leave.