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Hi Sally, I'm going to a concert that's at the Plaza Theatre tomorrow! We're going to have a snack in the coffee bar near our flat first, then we'll go to the theatre which is only 20 minutes away. The band's called the Oh dears! Dad and I went there last month to see The Gates (a brilliant reggae group). It's going to be great. Call me if you would like to come with us!
Love from Tina
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