Проверьте, пожалуйста, правильно ли грамматически написаны предложения. Reason: ...

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Проверьте, пожалуйста, правильно ли грамматически написаны предложения.

Reason:
Nowadays, majority of teenagers don't trust their parents. They dont share their thoughts with their parents, and keep all of their problems and thoughts in their head/mind. Teenagers have nobody to tell about their problems, and often they make wring decisions.

My solution how to bridge this gap:
i guess parents should spend more time with their children, ask them how was their day, and then, maybe, teenagers will trust their parents and get closer with them.

Reason:
In our time, teenagers do not read many books so they have no good vocabulary.
Books help us develop our speech in a correct way.

My solution how to bridge this gap:
To my mind, kids have to read many books, because books is not only interesting, but it is also helpful.


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Reason:

Nowadays, a vast majority of teenagers don't trust their parents. They don’t share their thoughts with their parents, and keep all of their problems and thoughts to themselves. Teenagers have nobody to talk to about their problems, and they often make the wrong decisions.

 

My solution how to bridge this gap:

I guess parents should spend more time with their children, ask them how their day was, and then, maybe, teenagers will trust their parents a bit more and get closer to them.

 

Reason:

In our time, teenagers do not read as many books as did their parents. As a result, their vocabulary is rather limited. Good books help us develop the ability to express ourselves in speech and writing.

 

My solution how to bridge this gap:

To my mind, kids should read more books, because books are not only interesting, but also educational and motivating.

 

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Я не стал все переписывать, только местами подправил. Всегда легче писать самому полностью, а не редактировать

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Problem(?)
Majority of  teenages doesn't trust - Most  of  teenagers don't  trust
 Majority≠they  from   the  second  sentence.
in  their  minds.
and  often  make  wrong
My solution .... :
 Parents....     and  get  closer  to  them.
Problem:
...Dooks help us to  develop....
In my opinion,   

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