May 30, 2013 Dear Granny, School are over, I said Goodbye to all my cl assmate and...

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May 30, 2013 Dear Granny, School are over, I said Goodbye to all my cl assmate and teachers.I'll comes to see you soon.I'd like to play on the forest and go fishing with my old friends.When father and mother have there holidays we'll go to the mountains.It'll be great.Father thinks the air is good their.Mother like to pick up flowers and berry Love from Sandy 8 ошибок наити

Answer 1

School are over- Scholl is over
my cl assmate - classmates
I'll comes- come                                                                                                    on the forest -in the forest
 больше не знаю

Answer 2

Пишу правильный вариант, звездочками ошибки.

May 30, 2013

Dear Granny, school is* over, i said goodbye to all my classmates* and teachers. I’ll come* to see you soon. I’d like to play in* the forest and go fishing with my old friends. When father and mother have their* holidays will go to the mountains. It’ll be great. Father thinks the air is good there*. Mother likes* to pick up flowers and berries*.

Love from Sandy