ВАЖНО Напишите, какие ошибки есть в тексте (я его писала) Thanks very much for your...

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Напишите, какие ошибки есть в тексте (я его писала)
Thanks very much for your e-mail. At the moment I’m studying really hard, because next week we will have tests.
My lessons start at 8:00. After school I’m going home and doing homework. In the evening I’m going for a walk with my dog. At the weekend i go out with my friends
That’s all. Write again soon

Answer 1

Thank you for your e-mail. At the moment I’m studying really hard, because next week we will have tests.

My lessons start at 8:00 a.m. After school I go home and do homework(это если каждный день ты идешь домой и делаешь дз, а если только завтра например, то I will go home and do homework tomorrow). In the evening I go for a walk with my dog(если так каждный день, то так, а если только завтра, то I will go for a walk with my dog tomorrow's evening). At the weekend i go out with my friends

That’s all. Write me again,

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Ну вроде так

Answer 2

Thank you very much for your letter/e-mail. At the moment/Right now I'm studying hard, because I'll have tests on the next week.
My lessons starts at 8.00. After school I'll go home and do my homework. In the evening I'll go for a walk with my dog. Af the weekend I'll go out with my friends.
That's all. Write again soon.
Внимательно проверяй, ищи ошибки.
Обрати внимание на времена - ты составляешь планы на ближайшее будущее.