Привет! Помогиете с мини-сочинением по английскому. Укажите ** ошибки. Как можно лучше...

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Привет! Помогиете с мини-сочинением по английскому. Укажите на ошибки. Как можно лучше написать, что добавить, что убрать.

In free time I usually go to the river Kuban. This place isn't far from my home. There is quiet, calm and there are no people. I like to sit on the beach and look at water surface. I often draw or read there.
Sometimes I came there with my friends. We can talk, play something or build a sand castle together. We always have a good time there.
I love this spot, because I feel calm and well there.

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In free time I usually go to the river Kuban. This place doesn't far from my home. Here are quiet, calm and there aren't people. I like to sit on the beach and look at water surface. I often draw or read here.  Sometimes I come to this beach with my friends. We can talk, play something or build a sand castle together. We always have a good time here.  I love this spot, because I feel calm and well here.

Да уж. Везде написано There, но по смыслу должно быть here.There - Где-то что-то есть. Here - здесь, тут. Спроси у учительницы как правильно, или посмотри в переводчике. Просто твой текст на 3-

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