ПРОШУ, РАЗДЕЛИТЕ ** АБЗАЦЫ!!!! The Internet has become widely available and computer...

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ПРОШУ, РАЗДЕЛИТЕ НА АБЗАЦЫ!!!! The Internet has become widely available and computer games have become more popular than ever before. But is this a good thing? I don't believe it is, but others might disagree. In my opinion, many young people spend more time online playing games than doing sport or exercising. What is more, computer games can be addictive. This means that people are not in control of their habit and spend hours in front of a computer screen. As a result, they don't study or spend time with family and friends. Others may say playing computer games is fun. Young people work hard at school and need to take time off their sttudies to enjoy themselves. Furthermore, computer games can improve your thinking skills because you need to think and react quickly to situations in a game. However, I don't agree with this opinion. Young people should avoid computer games because it's almost impossible for them to control how much time they spend on them. Besides, we've all got enough bad habits already without adding one more to the pile. In conclusion, although computer games can be entertaining, I think there is a real danger they can do more harm than good. Thus, parents should set strict boundaries for their children to follow concerning this type of entertainment


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Technology is an important part of our lives. We use computers and other electric equipment at work and in the home. However, some people believe we rely too much on machines, and that the more technology improves, the lazier and weaker humans will become.
Technological advances are changing our lives very rapidly. Nowadays we can't do without such gadgets as mobile phones, PCs, digital tape recorders, air conditioners, fax machines and so on. Many people feel ill at ease without their laptop computers or GPS navigation systems.
In my opinion, technology facilitates our lives and saves our time. Computers help us do the most difficult sums and investigate complicated data. People do business, communicate and do the shopping via the Internet. It is much easier to do housework nowadays, thanks to electric equipment such as microwave ovens, washing machines and so on.
However, many people say that technology makes us lazier and weaker. For example, such technological developments as the telephone and the Internet have made communication much easier, but they can cause the loss of social interaction. A lot of people prefer communicating through a keyboard than face to face. That is why people don't meet as often as they did in the past. A lot of people are fond of watching TV and playing computer games. They spend hours in front of the screen. They have no time to read books or to communicate with their friends. They move less, speak less and they even think less. Of course, such way of life does much harm to their health.
To sum up, people should continue to develop technology, but they m

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