Помогите пожалуйста сократить текст к 10 предложениям(как сможете сократить, желательны...

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Помогите пожалуйста сократить текст к 10 предложениям(как сможете сократить, желательны было хотяб 10 и меньше.) Before I started high school my mom kept bugging me about which extracurricular activities I was going to choose. I really didn't know what the dig deal was. But now that I'm a senior,I totally understand. I've spent the last three months tilling in college applications, and now I get how important extracurricular activities are. Colleges want to see that you're busy not just in the classroom, but outside as well. For the last three years I've been very active on the Student Council. This is like student government. Our job is to work with the principal's office to make life at our school better. I'm also the captain of the girls' basketball team. We're not very good, but it keeps me fit and it's a lot of fun. My friend Tom plays on our soccer team. Now, they're really good! They won the championship in our school division three years in a row, and Tom is being recruited by colleges because he's our star forward. A bunch of my friends are really active in our school drama club. Last year they put on a great production of the musical "Grease". Our school also has an online newspaper, and almost anyone who wants to can contribute to that. But for me, the best of my extracurricular activities is the volunteer work I do at a senior centre. I go in once or twice a week and help in all sorts of ways, like reading out loud to someone or making decorations for a holiday party. Last year I travelled to our state capital to hear politicians talk about new laws for senior care. Because of this experience I'm now thinking about a career in public policy-and that's what I wrote about in my college application.


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1.Pamela's mother kept asking Pamela about her choice of extracurricular activities because she understood that it would be important for Pamela in future.2. She began to understand her mother's concern later when she was senior.3. A Student Council is student government which job is to work with the principal's office to make life at our school better4. Pamela plays basketball.  They're not very good, but it keeps her fit and it's a lot of fun. 5.Tom plays on their soccer team and he is really good. 6.Students of Pamela's school  can take part in drama club, online newspaper., the volunteer work7. She does the volunteer work 8. Pamela got interested in a career in public policy because she had enogh experience. She heard politicians talk about new laws

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