ПОМОГИТЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА ,ПОСМОТРИТЕ ТЕКСТ, ОШИБКИПЕРЕВОДИЛ ПЕРЕВОДЧИК, ПОЭТОМУ ОШИБОК ДОЛЖНО...

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ПОМОГИТЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА ,ПОСМОТРИТЕ ТЕКСТ, ОШИБКИ
ПЕРЕВОДИЛ ПЕРЕВОДЧИК, ПОЭТОМУ ОШИБОК ДОЛЖНО БЫТЬ МНОГО, КТО НИБУДЬ ПОСМОТРИТЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА!!
Dear youth
magazine,

The letters described the lives of
two girls. Both have a home. Sasha is a
house for a full family. For Kelly, it's a
children's pulp, where she was brought after the death of
their parents. Both are unhappy, but for different
reasons. Sasha surrounds mom, dad, brothers and sister,
but she was lonely, believes that no one does not
understand it,Kelly lacks live and affection mom

I'm feel sorry
for Kelly, since she does not remember this family. May take a long time and it
will gain a new family.A then she will be caring mother.

if I was
Kelly I would have remembered the difficult situations a family looking at
photos with family. I'd made ​​friends with new people. not to feel lonely. I
would do their favorite thing, for example, would often start to draw,
photograph nature.

I wish
Kelly to find their new parents. I wish that her dreams were made, and that in
the future it had a large and happy family


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Lives of two girls are described in the letters. They both have a home. Sasha has a whole family. Kelly lives in a children's home where she was brought after the death of her parents. They both are unhappy, bur for different reasons. Sasha is surrounded by mother, father and sisters, but she is lonely, she thinks that nobody understands her. Kelly needs love and caress of mother. I feel sorry for Kelly as she doesn't remember her real family. May be one day she will have a new family. And then she will become a careful mother. If I were Kelly I would remember my family in difficult cases and look at the my family's picrures. I would do my favorite things. for example, i would start to draw or take photos of nature. And I would also find new friends. I wish she will find her new parents. I hope all dreams of this girl will come true. And she will be the happiest girl ever!
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