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Проверте пожалуйста текст на наличие ошибок, может быть слова не так записаны, а может вообще заменить нужно.
I would like to say a few words about my great-grandmother . Her name Nadeeva Fedosya Egorovna . She was born May 29, 1915 in Mordovia. She worked as an elementary school teacher . Her family had 6 brothers and 2 sisters , 5 brothers and elder nephew died in the Great Patriotic War. These events affected the history of her family and our too. And I know that it is not moved from place to place . She moved to Omsk in 1938, because in Mordovia was a great drought , 5 years nothing would grow . It was the first and last crossing . Unfortunately we have no family legends , but I'm happy that I could share with you at least something .

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These events affected the history of her family and ourS too.

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And I know that a family didn't move from place to place

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It (потому что семья не she) moved to Omsk in 1938

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because there was a great drought in Mordovia

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for 5 years nothing had been grown

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It was the first and last their resettlement (может быть, moving, но не crossing - это ближе к перекрестку или пересечению (дороги)

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1) And I know that a family didn't move from place to place
2) These events affected the history of her family and ours too.
3) It (потому что семья не she) moved to Omsk in 1938
4) because there was a great drought in Mordovia
5) for 5 years nothing had been grown
6) It was the first and last their resettlement (может быть, moving, но не crossing - это ближе к перекрестку или пересечению (дороги)

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I know that THE family didn't move from place to place