Через переводчик переводила? Так будет правельнее
Sasha and Kelly Live different life, both of them are not happy. sasha is girl from a good caring family, but she always complains. in my opiniont she is very spoiled girl and her problems are not significant. Kelly is less fortunate. she is very lonely (because I do not have dreams about .) Sasha did not appreciate. But with such a hard life she does not give up trying to be strong (and not pathetic-не корректно сказано,либо убери, либо вставь что то другое). Kelly deserves respect