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I love cats. they are funny and cute . I have a cat , his name is Bucks . him one year and twelve months. by human standards is sixteen years. he is very playful and affectionate . when he was little he was accustomed to walk directly on the tray . My sister often takes it in Bryansk . by its coat color is very similar to the tiger. Bucks are very sneaky . he has a very fluffy paws . in his heart he is like a dog, he always somehow know when I go to school. When the door opens, he runs towards me , rubbing against my legs and meowing loudly , as if to say how much he missed me . he has a very beautiful eyes -green- zheltye.Moy cat, not just a pet , a family member . he is very smart and understands what you can do and what nelzya.Ona loves playing with the ball . he is very smart and knows what can and what can not . he eats little , and if you eat only schhiskas . he is very curious and laziit everywhere ... he has a very sharp claws ... his favorite toy is a gray mouse , Cator it always brings me into the room. I love my cat.

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я люблю котов. они забавные и милые. я имею кота, его зовут Бакс. ему один год и двенадцать месяцев. по человеческим меркам это шестнадцать лет. он очень игривый и ласковый. когда он был маленьким он сразу был приучен ходить на лоток. моя сестра часто забирает его в Брянск. по своему окрасу он очень похож на тигра. Бакс очень трусливый. у него очень пушистые лапки. в душе он похож на собаку,Он всегда каким-то образом узнаёт, когда я иду со школы. Когда дверь открывается, он выбегает мне навстречу, трётся об мои ноги и громко мяукает, как будто говорит, как сильно он скучал по мне. у него очень красивые глаза-зелёно-жёлтые.Мой кот, не просто домашнее животное, а член семьи. он очень умный и понимает что можно делать а что нельзя.Она очень любит играть с мячиком. он очень умный и знает что можно а что нельзя. он мало ест, а если и ест то только щхискас. он очень любопытный и лазиит везде...у него очень острые когти...его любимая игрушка это серая мышка, каторую он всегда приносит ко мне в комнату. я люблю своего кота.


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I love cats. They are funny and cute. I have a cat, his name is Bucks. He is one year and twelve months old. By human standards it is sixteen years. He is very playful and affectionate. When he was young he was accustomed to defecate directly on a tray. My sister often takes him in Bryansk. By its fur color is very similar to the tiger. Bucks is very sneaky. He has very fluffy paws. By his character he is like a dog, he always somehow knows when I go to school. When the door opens, he runs towards me, rubs against my legs and meows loudly, as if he wants to say how much he has missed me. He has very beautiful eyes - green and yellow. My cat, is not just a pet he is a family member. He is very smart and understands what he is allowed to  do and what is forbidden. He loves playing with a ball. He doesn't eat much and he likes Whiskas. He is very curious and climbs everywhere.  He has very sharp claws. His favorite toy is a gray mouse which he always brings into my room. I love my cat.
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I love cats. they amusing and lovely. I have a cat, his name is Bax. he is one year old and twelve months. to human measures it is sixteen years. it very playful and tender. when it was small it at once was accustomed to go on a tray. my sister often takes away it to Bryansk. on the color it is very similar to a tiger. Dollar very cowardly. it has very fluffy pads. in soul it is similar to a dog, He always somehow learns when I go from school. When the door opens, it runs out to me towards, rubs about my feet and loudly mews as though speaks as strongly it missed me. it has very beautiful eyes - greenish-yellow. My cat, the pet, and the family member isn't simple. he very clever also understands that it is possible to do and that it is impossible. She very much likes to play with a ball. he very clever also knows that is possible and that it is impossible. he eats a little and if eats that only щхискас. it very curious and лазиит everywhere... it has very sharp claws. . its favourite toy is a gray mouse which it always brings to me to the room. I love the cat.

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