знающие английского языка найдите ошибки плизз и исправьте there are mrs smith , holmes...

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знающие английского языка найдите ошибки плизз и исправьте
there are mrs smith , holmes and clueless . in the picture mrs smith bring chocolate cake and some tea .
the tea is hot enough for clueless , but for holmes the tea is too strong . for clueless this tea is too wear . they began to arque .
mrs smith is angry , and she does not want to give to them any chocolate cake. then homes is apologize and then she give to them a cake .
for Holmes the cake it is too sweet but for clueless the cake it is not sweet enough. then mrs smith finally became angry

Answer 1

There is  mrs  smith  ,  holmes  and  clueless  in the room (обязательно где) .  In  the picture we can see  mrs  smith bringing  chocolate cake  and  some  tea  .
The tea  is  hot  enough  for  clueless  ,  but   for  Holmes    the tea  is  too  strong  .  for  clueless  this  tea  is  too  wARM  .  they  begINS (если весь текст в настоящем времени, то и здесь должно быть презент симпл)   to  arque .
mrs  smith  is  angry  ,  and  she  does  not  want  to  give  ---  them  any  chocolate  cake. then  hoLmes    apologizes  and   she gives    him  the  cake  .
  THe cake   is  too  sweet  for  Holmes but  for  clueless the  cake  --  is  not sweet   enough.  then  mrs  smith  finally  becOmeS  angry