Письмо ( английском языке )Прокомментируйте следующее заявление:Молодые люди в эти дни...

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Письмо ( английском языке )
Прокомментируйте следующее заявление:
Молодые люди в эти дни едят всё больше и больше нездоровой пищи. Некоторые люди считают, что реклама нездоровой пищи на телевидении должна быть запрещена.
Что вы можете сказать за и против запрета нездоровой пищи рекламы по телевизору? Напишите эссе на 200-250 слов, используя план.
Параграф 1 Введение (указание проблемы)
Параграф 2 Аргументы "за" (с примерами / обоснованиями)
Параграф 3 Аргументы "против" (с примерами / обоснованиями)
Параграф 4 Заключение

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Answer 1

Today I will be talking about the up side and the down side of junk food  being advertised during children’s television shows. Usually when I  turn on the T.V, I see it is a lot of advertizing of children's harmful products. Firstly, companies that produce junk food can make lots of money by advertising their products. They can increase the sale when children see the ads during the shows, it might convince them to buy it. On the other hand if junk food advertising was banned from being shown during children’s television shows children won’t have that exposure and they never know it existed. Secondly, If junk food advertising was banned children would stay fit and healthy not plump or fat. Children would never know about KFC and Hungry Jacks. Instead children would eat the yummy foods their parents give them. On the other hand if junk food was advertised children could get addicted to it and they become all plump and obese. Finally, junk food can be advertised with promotional toys that are tempting to buy because of the slick advertising. For example, MacDonald’s give away free Bakugan with the  Happy Meal. Hungry Jacks give some types of toys with the members meal. On the other hand if there wasn’t any ads children would not waste their money on junk food just for a toy. It is the responsibility of the individual person to choose how much junk food they want to eat, most people are aware of the consequences of eating junk food. In my opinion when children are watching television and see junk food advertisements, it is the parents of the child’s responsibility to take care of the child.