Найдите ошибки пожалуйста Dear Lucy. Hello . I hope you are fine . I am writing this...

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Найдите ошибки пожалуйста Dear Lucy. Hello . I hope you are fine . I am writing this letter to say a few words about what I love to do in your spare time . I like to go to the movies with friends . I can not say . that regularly go to the movies , but if I have a chance to go to the movies , I do it . when the weather is inclement , I prefer to play computer games . Of course you can say that this is a crazy idea to play computer games , but for me this is the best way to relax after a hard day . I have some exciting games and even dad joins me in the evenings. I heard that you got a role in the school play . my congratulations to you. what kind of performance . what role you will play . and when will this play . That's all . I hope you invite me for the presentation and write a few lines

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1.I like going to the movies with friends, вместо I like to go to the movies with friends 
2.I am writing this letter to tell you about what I do in my spare time лучше так, чем I am writing this letter to say a few words about what I love to do in your spare time. Хотя и так неплохо. 
3.I have some exciting games and even dad joins me in the evenings to play with me. Лучше так, иначе теряется смысл. 
А вот последние предложения я хз, не пойму что, где стоит, где запятые и тд.. Хотя бы текст нормально залила.