Проверте сочинение,если что-то не так исправте,пожалуйста!очень срочно!!!!! I like to...

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Проверте сочинение,если что-то не так исправте,пожалуйста!очень срочно!!!!!

I like to look trendy and I spend a lot of money on clothes,jewellery and accessories. My favourite clothes are denim-shorts and T-shirts.
My favourite shoes are sandals and trainers,because it comfortable. My favourite accessories are bracelets and necklaces.

At school I usually wear blouses,jackets,trousers,dresses,skirts white-colored or black because school is establishment where we should wear the strict clothes because it makes children more serious and more disciplined.
At home I always wear dressing-gown,because it cosily.
At a party I usually wear dresses and high-heel shoes.
At the beach I always wear swimsuit.

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I like to look fashionable, and I spend a lot of money for clothes, jewelry and accessories. My favourite clothes - shorts and T-shirts.
My favourite footwear - sandals and sneakers because it is convenient. My favourite accessories - bracelets and necklaces.

At school I usually carry blouses, jackets, trousers, dresses, skirts, white or black, because school - institution where we should wear strict clothes because it does children more serious and more disciplined.
Houses I always wear a dressing gown because it is cozy.
On parties I usually wear footwear on a high heel and dresses.
On a beach I always wear a bathing suit.