My name is Sergey. I am a pupil. I study in Kirov. I am 15 years . I have a lot of plans...

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My name is Sergey. I am a pupil. I study in Kirov. I am 15 years . I have a lot of plans for future. My future profession is my own choice. I study with pleasure. I would like earn my own money and become more independent.
When I succeed in my career. I plan to create a family and have children. If I realize all my plans, I will become happy. And then, perhaps, I will plan something new for future.

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Исправьте пожалуйста ошибки.

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My name is Sergey and I am 15 years old. I am a pupil studying in Kirov. I have a lot of future plans. My future profession is up to me to choose. I study with pleasure.I would like to earn my own money and become more independent as soon as possible.When I succeed in my career, I plan to create a family and have children. If I realize all my plans, I will become happy. And then, I will surely make new aims for me and my future family.

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так поинтереснее будет

Answer 1

I'm studying in Kirov (т.к. действие временное, учеба имеет свойство заканчиваться)
I have a lot of plants to future (на будущее, а не для будущего)
...something new to future (та же ошибка)

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очередной неграмотный школьник..