Задали написать сочинение в past simple "как я провел лето". Нужно помочь с коррекцией...

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Задали написать сочинение в past simple "как я провел лето". Нужно помочь с коррекцией где надо поменять глаголы и сочинение должно быть написано от женского рода) Очень надеюсь на помощь.
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Summer is my favorite season. Summer I spent on the street. I to ride a bike, walked, to played pin-pong. In the summer I read school literature. I often went to shopping center for shopping. But also I went to camp. There I time held good . I with my friends win competitions, danced, drew, walked. There had discos every night. I guess, those were the most exciting of the summer. It gave me bright impressions, lots of funny photos and some new friends.

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Summer is my favourite season. Last summer I didn't go anywhere in June and in July, and I stayed almost all the time in the city. I rode my bike, walked in the park in fresh air, played ping-pong with my friends.  I also read some books on Literature, History Geography and Biology. I often went to the shopping centre to do the shopping. But in August I went to a teens summer camp. It was really fun. It was situated by a lake and we swam and dived in it when the weather was warm and sunny. I made some new friends there. Together with them we took part in different competitions, festivals. We played sport games, danced, drew, went on a boat trip. In the camp there were discos almost every night. I guess, those were the most exciting  days of my rest last  summer. I got bright impressions, lots of funny photos and some new friends.

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